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Stop.

Don't breathe.
Don't
think.

He might hear you.


I am pressed against the wall. My fingers are spread as wide as they will go as my palms press heavily on the drywall. I take a deep breath. Hold it tight. I feel the air escaping my lungs, my circulation; my blood thinning of oxygen as I hold, one, two, three….

I hear Him slither down the hallway. His movements are languid, snake like, as He comes after me. I can imagine it all in my head: the long, thin arms, coiling around every turn and corner, searching for me. Have you ever noticed His face? His eyes—or lack thereof? I have a theory. He doesn't have eyes because He doesn't need them. He hears things. Feels things. Smells things.

I exhale, slowly, hoping not to catch His attention. It's a fruitless thought. He knows where I am. He's only playing with me. A game of cat-and-mouse, where He is the cat, and I am nothing more than a rubber mouse hiding underneath old and rusty furniture. He will find me. It will only be a matter of time.

My fingers curl into knuckles. I bring my arms down to my sides and take a tentative step down the room. Always pressing against the wall because it's dark. I can't even see my own hand in front of me. He killed the lights. I have to wonder if He senses things better in the dark. Every attack I've heard of, the lights have been off, or it's been outside at night with no moon in the sky.

Would it be so awful to die by His hands? Would He play with me, torture me, or make it fast and sleek? Am I prolonging my torment by waiting for Him, by playing into His games?

Crunching sounds. Wet, deep, and throaty chuckles. A snap. I wonder what He's found—then I remember my pet rabbit. He's eating my rabbit. I want to cry and to scream, to find Him and kill Him for this. I can't move, though. I've been immobilized by fear and by the wet choking sounds coming from the other room. I hear a damp tearing sound and wonder what part of the body He is eating now. My rabbit didn't even squeal—didn't even notice the Monster creeping up on it.

The slow, steady, drip, drip, drip of blood platters against the ground. In the silence, I can hear it, only punctuated by the low grinding coming from His mouth. Ploop. Crunch, ploop. Does He drink blood?

There is a sound like a zip of electricity and the lights flicker to life.

I gasp.

The crunching stops. Then, a small and husky giggle. I feel as if I am about to faint as I look around the room frantically. Where to hide? Where will He be least likely to look first?

I dive beneath the bed. I barely fit as I shimmy my way into the small space as silently as I can. Once I am settled, I roll over to look out from beneath the bed. There is a small area where the sheets do not meet the floor. I can see the door to the bedroom and shadows as they dance all around the dark and cramped space.

I hold my breath. One, two, three….

The slow slithering. Down the hallway. I see His shadow growing bigger, then smaller, in the doorframe, as he comes closer to the light.

Finally, His legs are visible. Long, black fabric touches the floor. I see no sign of feet, and in the last moments of my life, I wonder if He even needs to walk—or if he simply floats.

He walks into the room and turns around. I don't dare exhale, although my lungs are screaming for release.

He walks closer. Closer still. I feel the air growing stale and old inside my chest. I am growing dizzy, although I can't tell if it's from the lack of oxygen or from the spine-wrenching fear.

The movement stops. He begins to kneel.

He lifts the sheets and bends down low, so that his face slowly comes into my view.

And he smiles.
Slenderman.

My stab at a Slenderman fic.

For ~MissDelirium

<3



7/4/2012
I get a lot, a lot a lot a lot, a lot, a LOT of comments questioning this, and I'm surprised I haven't qualified this yet in the description, so here you go.

The original Slenderman mythos (we're talking early 2005 Slenderman, yes, he was spoken about that long ago) dictated that he appeared differently for each person he visited. For some people, he'd have no face; for others, he would. It all depended on what that particular person found the scariest.
The Slenderman that has become the popularized view of Slenderman is, of course, the Slenderman from Marble Hornets. There are a lot of spin offs of Slenderman, but they all source back to Marble Hornets in some way, shape, or form.

When I wrote this, I PURPOSELY drove it away from the popularized view of Slenderman. I wanted to bring him back to his Something Awful roots. The best way to do that, to me, seemed to draw my reader in using what I thought was scary.
A monster without a face, to me, is laughable. It's alien, sure, but it's just alien enough that it's difficult for readers to imagine in a scary context. After all, everything has a face. Everything has to have a mouth, and eyes, and blahblahblah. For some, the idea that something couldn't have these things might be terrifying for them; for me, it wouldn't have stuck. it wouldn't have been scary. I would have just kept questioning the logistics of how it was possible.
So, my Slenderman appears with a face. I don't know if he has eyes or not, but he has a mouth. To me, you can deal without eyes (probably because my brother is blind, so I grew up knowing you can get away without seeing); but you can't survive without a mouth. So my version of Slenderman has a mouth, probably very wide, full of sharp teeth set in the back of his mouth.

It's just my interpretation of Slenderman! You don't have to agree, and I don't mind if you guys want to share your versions of Slendy to me. If you like the Marble Hornets interpretation, go for it! Just don't knock my version.
Marble Hornets may be the best known form of Slenderman, but that doesn't mean it's the ONLY form!



9/18/2012
Caught the 1,000 favorites mark! Thanks guys! You are all INSANE.

PS--keep an eye out for a sequel, perhaps?...
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Slenderman X Child Reader (F)!
by DMC3Vergil, Sep 1, 2013, 8:04:44 PM
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You played in the woods, the leaves falling from the trees. You giggled and laughed as you tossed your ball around. The stripped colored ball, rolled away from you. You followed it, but stopped when your ball stopped by a man's feet. The faceless man picked it up, you smiled as he tossed it back to you. Catching it in your small hands, you ran up to the well dressed man. Lifting the ball up to him, taking it into his own hand, the other rubbed your hair. You giggled, he turned you around, pushing you to walk forward. You turn around to face him, you were only a couple of feet away. Slenderman bounces the ball to you, catching it once more, you throw back to him. You two played with the ball for a while til he looked off to the side, you held the ball in your arms. Slenderman started to walk away, you followed. But he stopped you, letting you know to stay here. Than he left. Your frown didn't stay long, you smiled once more. Dropping the ball, you kicked it. Causing it to hit the truck and bounce back. Walking over to your toy, you picked it up. You heard footsteps from behind, you thought it was your 'Father'. Turning around, someone shined a flashlight at you. You were disappointed, but you still smiled. The man screamed and fell backwards, he quickly picked up his flashlight and shined it back at you. The stranger sighed in releaf, he stood to his feet, dustinghimself off. The man walked up to you,

"You shouldn't be here little one." The person grabbed on of your tiny hands, making your ball fall out of your arms. You both walked up to the truck, he took a pieace of paper off of it. You didn't know there was one on there, as you both quickly walked away. Slenderman stopped looking down at the ball you dropped, picking it up. Slenderman lifted his head back up, to see you were gone. he walked off into the woods, meanwhile the man you were with was freaking out from the tiniest of sounds. Causing you to giggle, he would look down at you strangly. You both walked up to a TV, 'Steve' you called the man. Picked up a pair of batteries and a paper along with it.

"4 more to go." grabbing your hand once more, he hurried out of the grassy field and onto the dirt road. The flcker of the lamp caused the Steve to get scared,

"______." You heared your name being called out, you ripped your hand out of Steve's grip. Running into the woods,

"Hey! Wait! Come back! It's dangerous out here!" Steve ran after you, you stopped. The man stopped a few feet away from you, your (E/C) eyes looking around in the dark, foggy area. Steve quickly grabbed your hand,

"We can't be in here. come on." He whispered to you and tugged on your arm, but refused to move. Steve picked you up, headed back to the road. Slenderman appeared, you held out your small arm. But his figure disapeared when you got far away enough, putting your arm back down, you looked a head of you. You both stopped a couple of times to look at the maps, Steve sat you down. He crouched down to your level,

"Promise not to run away from me like that again...Okay." You nod your head,

"Good." He stood back up, grabbing your hand once more. You both walked off. Halfway down the road, Steve's flashlight started to flicker on and off.

"What?..Damn thing..Work!" He it a couple of times and looked at the batteries, you turn around to see Slenderman not to far away. Steve looks down at you,

"What are you looking at?" He turns around,

"Ahhh, HOLY SHIT!!!" He picked you up again, taking off running. When you two were far away enough, Steve let you down. Steve was hunched over trying to catch his breath,

"That was too close." He wipped his forehead, you put your hands behind your back, looking in the direction you two ran from. You were still calm as the man freaked out a little more. You were wondering why you two was running away for,

"_____, come back to me." You looked towards the woods, your (H/C) hair swaying to the side slightly as you looked. Your arms fell to the your sides, running over to the forest. Steve straightened his back, he turned slightly to see you run back into the woods.

"Aww, come on kid. We made a deal." Steve followed after you, Stopping in the middle of a clearing. Steve stopped, but slowley walked up to you.

"Come on, kid. Let's go." Your ball bounced out of the trees and landing by your feet, bending down, you picked it up. Turning fully around to face Steve, Steve stopped dead in his tracks, eyes going wide. He watched as Slenderman merged from the darkness behind you. Tilting your head to the side, didn't know what he was scared about. Turning around slightly, your smile widen.

"Slendy!" You cheered happily as you ran up to him, Slenderman picked you up. Holding you close to his chest, You looked up at him than back to Steve. Your teeth started to show from your cheshire smile, fangs(Like Grell's teeth.) Steve backed up slightly, tenticles surround you and Slenderman. You waved at steve as Slender's tenticles priced Steve's body, blood fell to the ground like rain. The man's body going limp, his body fell to the ground with a load "Thud." Looking up at the faceless man, you frowned. Slender looks down at you,

"Sowwy, I weft." Laying your head on Slender's chest, your eyelids fell from sleep taking over............You woke up, you noticed you were in bed. Looking around, you saw your ball on the floor. Getting down from the bed, you picked it up. Walking out of the room, you went down the stairs. Seeing Masky and Hoodie sitting on the couch, You quitely snuck by them. You entered the kitchen Eyeless Jack was making himself a sandwich, but Smiliy the dog took off with his sandwich while Jack was looking in the firgewater. Making your way to the door, you went outside. Before you could go further outside, Jeff and Ben stopped you. Jeff picked you up by the collar, you struggled to get free, but failed.

"You can't leave our sight this time." All three of you reenter the house, jeff setting you in the middle of Masky and Hoodie. They looked at you than went back to watching TV, You relized that you dropped your ball. Looking back and fourth at the two boys, you got down from the couch, but Hoodie gripped your armand lifted you back up. You frowned and crossed your arms. After a while you were focused on watching cartoons, you leaned into Masky's side. You almost fell asleep, when Slender walked trough the door. Holding a cup of coffee and a newspaper under his arm, you got up and ran to him. Hugging him, you backed up a little. He handed you your ball, you hugged him again. Slender grabbed the newspaper from under his arm and walked off after you were done hugging him.
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Slenderman X Child Reader (F)!
by DMC3Vergil
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Lady-Weavile-461 4 days ago
I'm probably the only one who thinks this is really disturbing and in the same vein and FNAF... 
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PastaCreeps Aug 6, 2015
So.Freakin.CUTE!!! 
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ZariaQuartz Jul 30, 2015
Firgewater?? Aww!!
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SuperHarryWhoLock Jul 30, 2015
Don't know why, but since I am using my phone, at first glance of the pic when it was small I thought Slendy had boobs for a second..xD
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GlitchGeminiwolf Jul 24, 2015
I love it!!!!!!!😊😄😎👍
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creepypasta1catgirl Jul 1, 2015
Grell 
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JuliaAbadeer-Uchiha Jun 6, 2015
Yay for Kuroshitsuji reference!
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KumaXnoXko May 27, 2015
im so sorry........... i aint risking no spooky ghost stuff. now to send this to my freinds.
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KumaXnoXko May 27, 2015
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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DisneyFanGirl4Life Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
XD if he gets into MY houses and I try to hide under my bed, I'm dead meat, just like that, poor, helpless little rabbit... My bed touches the floor. Theres no space under it. I'm dead... *gulps*
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
This is why I keep scissors next to my bed XD because weapons are what people expect they don't expect you to stab them with a pair of kiddy scissors from dollar tree XD
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DisneyFanGirl4Life Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I keep a 6 inch heavy-duty kitchen knife in my drawer. Uh... Ya...
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
XD I know were my mom keeps the tazer XD
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DisneyFanGirl4Life Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
'":| I'm scared now...
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
XD
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DisneyFanGirl4Life Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Lol.
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015
:3
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Kyomiko Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
omg i loved this! it really got me good and I actualy also love that you explain your own version of Slenderman and can apriciate that you went with a diffrent route than what is common.
(i actualy also was about to go to bed but just nevermind)
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solkat7 Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
omg i was on the edge of my seat the entire time!
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Lauradrakkyn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: *shouts* PEEKABOO!
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gravityfalls1344 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
Omfg dis is awesome :slenderla: 
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CreepyBlaze Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! You write like a boss! I'm adding this to my faves right now!
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Sky-LunarPhase Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude I love Slendy creepypasta and I think this one just made my top 10.  The suspense was killer and making him eat the bunny added to that... poor Bunny though, never had a chance. :'(
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CyborgNinja3 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
Maybe I shouldn't have read this at 1 am
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gravityfalls1344 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
LOLOLOL
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Ana-chanYukia Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No so good whyyy
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woy-bunny-hop Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this kidnapping dude!Even though I will scream if he was real,it was a really cool story!I don't think there is going to be a sequel of the movie,a friend of mine told me that 3 girls got hypotized by slenderman because they keep looking at him.They end up killing the girl who was at the bathroom.I thought he was kidding,but he was always telling the truth.
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Swag2003 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cool story bro!
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DvArtGal13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014
I read this and I shat bricks
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Zm156 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Scary! Very scary! Cool story!
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faithbrier Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
creepy dude...very creepy!
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InvaderIka Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is amazing and describes Slender and his hunting tactics in the eyes of the victim pretty damn well! I congratulate you!
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DI-LastShadow Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Do you mind if I do a dramatic reading and put it on my Tumblr?
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CLOWNFISH14 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Creepy.
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Eeveeon55 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It a really good story. I love the way you write!
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TheREALTwilightSpark Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My idea of Slendy is a lot like yours, except he usually has a blank face, but his mouth appears when he wants to eat something (or someone) 

-looks back- Kinda like- OH SHIZ I'M GONNA FREAKING DIEEEEEE!!!!
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Leaves-from-the-Vine Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
>< Sometimes, before I fall asleep, his image just randomly pops up in my head without me even trying to think about it. I hate that. 
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TheBossman0922 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
I think I just shat my pants from intensity.
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Kaybug2K Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Pimpman
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deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love it. Great cliff hanger.
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sarahdaniellem Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student General Artist
...wow...that was amazing! kinda left at a cliff hanger but hey, It was really well written.
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Shadowmlaimer Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
WAKE. UP.
You're either dreaming or playing video games
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Firerozebud Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student General Artist
aaaah!!! that is an evil cliff hanger!! but i love it!!
you did so well on this!
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Firedragon01 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Therapy here I come !
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Dragonloverkm Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, you should totally write a book this is amazing your so creative.
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blueraverwolf Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Love it!!!!!!!!!
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EmeraldGirlie Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude... You're dead!
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TrentenCunningham Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I really liked this. Your interpretations are interesting, to say the least. Especially how he ate the bunny, it added to the suspense.
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Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads ending*
NEVER SLEEPING AGAIN
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ramo1357 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
mine had only eyes, and he could catch me when  i  was asleep, so i started to fight falling sleep at nights,
it was several years ago, when i saw (felt) him in my dreams, i wasnt a kid, but it was so scary, he came to 
my dreams once per month at first , and after 3,4 months he came every weeks, and after a while every
nights, it was looked like that he watching me during the day, cause at night in my dream he knew about
every details that had happened to me on that day
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RKA916 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So perfectly creepy.
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Dest123G Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very descriptive and creepy, great story! :)
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theajsmaster Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
LOVE SLENDERMAN!!!!
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animefreekout101 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Jeff: GO TO SLEEP
me: Sorry bro, NOT TONIGHT
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LUKYWOLF Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was intense! And now I dont wanna go to sleep...
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EskeWolf406 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
In my opinion, this idea grips me and I am laughing just blown away. Keep up the great work!
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farfallXD6767 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
omg so cool!
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ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
good writing
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